Saturday, November 14, 2009

I wish

I wish I was the tallest man in the whole wide world,
so then they could see all the little things I do
and hear all the little things I say.
Then they’d all have to look up to me,
And I’d look down on them all.

I wish and wish with all might,
To take away all my fright,
But I know that I’ll never change,
And I’ll always be the same.
But where there’s hope, there is chance,
And that’s where I’ll take my stance.

I wish I was the smartest man in the whole wide world.
I’d have all the answers,
And solve all the riddle.
I’d know everything,
While they knew nothing.

I wish and wish with all might,
To take away all my fright.
But I know that I’ll never change,
And I’ll always be the same.
But where there’s hope, they might be chance,
And that’s where I’ll be tonight.

I wish I was the strongest man in the whole wide world
Then I’d never have to fight
I’d sleep sound at night
And they’d all fear me
that’s the way it should be

I wish I was the happiest man in the whole wide world,
I’d never stop smiling,
I’d never stop laughing,
And I wouldn’t care about a thing,
I would just dance and sing.

I wish and wish with all might,
To take away all my fright.
But I know that I’ll never change,
And I’ll always be the same,
But where there’s hope, there is chance,
And that’s where I’ll take my stance.

I wish I wasn’t the loneliest person in the whole wide world,
I could maybe hold your hand,
And maybe I wouldn’t sleep by myself,
And wake up to someone else,
Maybe I wouldn’t die alone....



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This is just a poem a wrote recently, what are your Thoughts?Suggestions?Questions?

2 comments:

  1. Yay for poetry week! LOL

    I really like this poem. I think the repetition in this poem was executed very well. I think it is such an interesting theme.

    I don't know what else to say. I just really like it :)

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  2. I know right, everyone wrote a poem this week.
    I liked this poem,good use of repitition to enphasize the point of the poem.
    good job

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