Of the favorite memories of our family,
Mom and Dad ,
Christmas rekindles all the best we've ever had~
The wonderful traditions you taught us,
And we kept from year to year
Added to each Holiday
To make it's meaning clear.
Your warmth, smiles and laughter
Kept us eager to believe
In the magic and wonder
That was part of Christmas Eve,
And though Christmas
Have come and gone,
It seems that wishes did come true,
In the lasting love our family shares
Because of the caring by both of you.
I love this! It was written so nicely and your rhyme scheme had a great flow to it. I also like how you played with the font colors - very festive :P
ReplyDeleteI really don't have any thing to suggest. Except maybe should the line "Have come and gone" be changed to "Has come and gone"
I love the message behind it - good work.
This is a cute post, i love Christmas.
ReplyDeleteI think rebecce was right, i liked the way you formatted this piece with the allertating colours, to make it more festive, and the line spacing helped to make the reader stop and think about each line, very cummingese.
Good flow and consistance throughout the whole piece.
good job
Ah this is was very cute, i loved the colours you used and the picture. This was just very simple but heartwarming, yay for Christmas and traditions. Good job! Keep up with the unique formatting
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