Ode To Cheese,
Which Makes Us Smile,
When Camera's go Clack.
Ode To Cheese,
Which make us taste,
The greatest of flavors,
the wackiest of whack.
Ode To Cheese,
Blue, Gorgonzola,
American and Cheddar.
Ode To Cheese,
Beja and Feta,
In all types of weather.
Ode To Cheese,
For those on a diet,
or trying to get fatter.
Ode To Cheese,
with crackers and wine,
with grapes can flatter.
Ode To Cheese,
when you're sad and happy,
Cheese just fits.
Ode To Cheese,
Mountains and Mountains,
or bits and bits.
Ode to the Cheese,
To appreciate, eat, and take pictures.
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"Ode To Cheese,
ReplyDeleteMountains and Mountains,
or bits and bits."
so cute! this stanza made me smile.
although isn't the keats style of ode, i did enjoy the simplistic ideas and repetition in this piece.
Ode To Cheese,
with crackers and wine,
with grapes can flatter.
<< this created a really strong picture; you can taste and smell it all coming together for an evening get together snack. :)
i feel like the laslt stanza could present a more prominent picture, just like you did with teh wine and grapes, etc.. like, if instead of recapping what you've described about cheese, say something else about it, maybe its more meaningful or maybe its the opposite - just simpler.
the Ode to Cheese gets a little repetitive, but for the legnth you have it, i wouldn't say that you coudl change it..
but i did enjoy reading this interpretation! :) now cheese and crackers is all i really want!
I agree with Diana! Now I really want crackers and cheese.
ReplyDeletei thought this was a very cute ode. It made me laugh. And although you didn't follow the traditional format for the ode, you still made it your own and focused on the many aspects of one topic. I like how you used a ryhme scheme to maintain interest.
I think the couplet should be stronger to end it on a powerful note.
i agree with diana the you used some great imagery, to create a real feeling for this piece, i got a true sense of comfort and firmiliarity with this piece.
ReplyDeletecute subject matter for a poem.