They say they love you
they say they care
but on your final day
they turn the other way
you give them dedication
you listen to what they say
we wait for them at the door
they walk away when we're on the floor
Little monsters
created by us
ignoring us
forgetting us
they forget we made them
and we Destroy them
I started this piece with clear vision, but it got a little misrepresented somewhere in the middle. if you have any suggestions to improve it, would love to hear them
Saturday, November 28, 2009
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Hehe I liked the little monsters ;P
ReplyDeleteI really like this though! I thought it was really dark and cool.
I'm not entirely sure what it is about though, but the imagery is strong!