I NEED A PSYCHIATRIST!
I am obviously not well. I see things, I hear thing, what if I really am going insane?
My best friend passed away 3 years ago, and I still half expect her to walk through the front door-I heard someone say her name and turned to see if it was her.
This is not right - I should know better then this, I am well aware that she is gone, not coming back, dead, buried, GONE...
Why do I still feel like this is all just some sick, twisted dream, that I will wake up from.
3 years- its been 3 years , shes been gone 3 years(sobs)
what is happening to me?
Am I really losing touch?
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Hey guys, this is a piece I wrote about the jumbled thoughts that goes through a persons mind when they have finally come to terms with there problems.
In this case, the death of a beloved friend or family member and the idea that they will never come back, and that death is a final decision.
This person, thought that they had come to terms with the death of a sister but realized that they would never fully recover from such a tragic blow.
Its sad that this kind of thing happens, but it just shows that we can never really know for sure how fare any incident is going to effect our lives and that the human mind is a very fragile thing that can easily be destroyed.
I hope you enjoyed it.
This was an interesting piece. But I feel that it's lacking. I think you could have developed it more. With such a strong concept, you chould write more about the character's emotions and distress, and maybe even the relationship with her sister and why it meant so much to her.
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